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Open Poetry #43
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Inspired-8
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since 2008-04-14
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Pluto
0 posted 2008-10-11 09:57 PM


Broken shattered

Faded memories

What had mattered

So neglected carelessly


Unspoken gestures

Thoughts and dreams

Silence reassures

No words can plea


Comes the darkness

Nightfalls on day

Contrasting starkness

Sorrow's way...


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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2008-10-12 04:07 AM

Deeply melancholic tune, dear Vic, that brings a sigh.

Well done.

Love,
margherita  

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
2 posted 2008-10-12 04:16 AM

ah lovely Victor.. I get to read you again... a little sad this piece... so tell me what is your happiness rating today?   love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........
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