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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2008-10-06 12:30 PM

Pianissimo

the

rain

fell

like piano notes
a lullaby in
a major minor
right laced ivory
past middle c
tapping at glass
afraid to be free
sharp flat black
softly slid
from tunes
in the air
liquid composition
of sound
in magic noise

"no darkness has ever been deep enough to extinguish my personal knowledge of love" Anne Rice

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2008-10-06 06:26 AM

Helen... this is exquisite writing.. I enjoyed the read... thank you love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

2 posted 2008-10-08 06:43 PM

Beautiful.

Oklahoma Rose
Senior Member

since 2008-02-28

Posts 1586
Oklahoma USA

3 posted 2008-10-08 06:51 PM

I love the way you wrote this. This is fantastic.

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

4 posted 2008-10-09 12:40 PM

"liquid composition
of sound
in magic noise"

what exquisite imagery of music

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2008-10-09 02:45 AM

A pleasure to read...James

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2008-10-09 06:20 AM

OneSlick~
This is written in silky measure ... flowing gently in this spill of ink~

LOVELY~
*Huglets*

~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - [email protected]

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

7 posted 2008-10-09 07:40 PM

Music and rain, my favorite combination.
Lovely.
Ida

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

8 posted 2008-10-12 03:25 AM

Words and concepts and sounds, drop by soft drop, note by note flowing into each other, becoming each other in this exquisite rainword musical composition of yours. I hear it still.

- Owl

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

9 posted 2008-10-12 04:29 AM

You listen well and play the words beautifully.

Love,
Margherita

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