Open Poetry #43 |
Pianissimo |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Pianissimo the rain fell like piano notes a lullaby in a major minor right laced ivory past middle c tapping at glass afraid to be free sharp flat black softly slid from tunes in the air liquid composition of sound in magic noise "no darkness has ever been deep enough to extinguish my personal knowledge of love" Anne Rice |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Helen... this is exquisite writing.. I enjoyed the read... thank you love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Beautiful. |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
I love the way you wrote this. This is fantastic. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"liquid composition of sound in magic noise" what exquisite imagery of music |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OneSlick~ This is written in silky measure ... flowing gently in this spill of ink~ LOVELY~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Music and rain, my favorite combination. Lovely. Ida |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Words and concepts and sounds, drop by soft drop, note by note flowing into each other, becoming each other in this exquisite rainword musical composition of yours. I hear it still. - Owl |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You listen well and play the words beautifully. Love, Margherita |
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