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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. I hadn’t Expected it This soon Come Dear girl Of my Autumn days— One more dance Before we go In a still Blue sky Above the trees A silver moon . |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A little gem that conveys a dreamlike scenery. Love, Margherita |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
beautiful, just beautiful |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
grand-fine minimalism and poetic 'Romantic Impressionism'; etc.! serious, sustained applause!! |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Come Dear girl Of my Autumn days— One more dance Before we go this personification is awesome. yann |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
John... I have missed your beautiful pennings! this is exceptionally beautiful! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed the Write  ARCTIC WIND |
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