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Bleeding Passion
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Bleeding Passion |
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xTr3m3sT Member
since 2008-03-03
Posts 415 |
As the soft reflection of the moon glistens between the midnight painted roses my tiny footsteps echo faintly as every breath seeps away. Bleeding through my pores lies passion, and the fiery intensity of my eyes lets others realize, the pain he's suffered has been imprinted within his soul. Whisper in my ear just please, whisper in my ear. And say, Lo! For whom it may concern retire your pen, summon the courage and tell her, tell her you love her embrace her with every fiber of your being and never let her go. |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Thats really good. I like it. Well done. ""summon the courage and tell her, tell her you love her embrace her with every fiber of your being and never let her go."" Thats the GOOD STUFF. |
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xTr3m3sT Member
since 2008-03-03
Posts 415 |
Thank you very much! This is the first in a long time I reverted back to my original style :] I'm glad you enjoyed it. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
There is such beauty in the first stanza that I could almost forget the suffering and sadness, the fear to lose love.... thank you very much for sharing this poem... yann |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
good to read you again!  enjoyed this.love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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