Open Poetry #43 |
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October Light |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan ![]() |
. Around her hair The cool air Swirls Her long Wool coat Openly dances Upon the road And today Enthralled Flights of sparrows Will follow her Wherever she goes Through colored leaves Over autumn fields A song of bells . |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
sigh |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
A magical write. Ida |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
This is beautiful and precious poetry...Thanks yann |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
There is such a lightness in this and a harmony that flows through it, something both for the heart and for the eyes. Very beautiful! Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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