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lost and confused
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lost and confused |
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My_Innocents_Interupted17 New Member
since 2008-10-09
Posts 2mn |
DOWN I feel dea inside, hopeless with myself I just want to walk away from everything I find myself down and sad My heart pounds so fast making me lose breath Depression has caught up with me again I just want to sit here and talk to no one Sucluding myself isnt working either But i have no desire to do anything I feel like im melting away in my skin I no longer like what i see, disgusted People stare, making me angryier than ever But im betterthan that Walking in the dead of night Someone catch me im falling |
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kanashe Member
since 2008-05-21
Posts 59america |
i know the feeling, i loved the emotion of this piece enjoyed -ashe |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"I feel like im melting away in my skin" my favorite line in a powerful, evocative write...we've all been there...thanks for sharing, and welcome to PIP |
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