Open Poetry #43 |
Hotel 101 |
time prophet Member
since 2003-07-30
Posts 371In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees |
Hotel 101 well, maybe 23. At least thats what I see on the concrete pllar amidst the rivulets of dust in front of me. 0130 hours sucking on a cancer stick. On the grass verge a solitary tree, perhaps a dozen leaves choking to death. From the dust across the street where the cat rumbles and the mech' digger loads the trucks. Me not moving in the 32C and 60% humidity unable to sleep in a city that never sleeps. Soon, maybe, I will get to go home again. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
tp - Home is where the heart is! In an ideal world everyone would be where their hearts are but the world isn't ideal, is it? I wish that it was so but I've come to know that one nevertheless survives without a home. I do, however, wish you a speedy return to your home. Good to see you posting. I'm not sure that the scene you painted would be to my liking but I can see it - and feel it. Be safe. Helen |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello TP, reading your poem I thought not only of an hostel, but my mind saw the atmosphere of an hospital room.....I like your poem. regards yann |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Not sure what I am reading Frank ( although I am always bad at interpretations But I seem to agree with yann's Hoping you are well~~ M |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading...James |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Hope you find your way home. Ida |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
With thoughtful poetic minimalism, you set the scene. Enjoyed, as always. |
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