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Open Poetry #43
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depressedivinity
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since 2008-09-19
Posts 6
0 posted 2008-09-30 09:52 PM



i forgot
the meaning of friend
i know
i saw god in your eyes

completely elated
i felt heaven in your skin
a soft, silky wonderland

i have no title, no religion, no faith
i am human
i am a tangible creature with overbearing insight
i am real, i am here
above all, out of anything i am, or i am not
i hold one thing to be true

there is a higher place
i found it inside of you.
be my paradise.

~FR
© Copyright 2008 Frank Rosalia - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2008-10-10 11:31 PM

I'm sorry I missed this the first time through.  Welcome to Passions.
This is a very lingering and lovely write.
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