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Open Poetry #43

saint martin moan

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0 posted 2008-10-08 06:28 AM

whispers with liquor gold bold
bronze and candy coatings like velvet
when it is wet with warm water
a shimmer that clings to the eyes

you move your feet in the sand
making little places for my mind
knowing I will climb the trees
of you and know how your belly smiles

when you lean back on your elbows
and make those sounds with your mouth
not out loud enough for others
only my ears will know the music

how you almost speak but whisper
and wait for me to lean closer
to see if I heard what I hoped
and then you don't repeat it

but shout it loud with your eyes
_______________

daark

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (10-09-2008 05:50 AM).]

SEA

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with you

1 posted 2008-10-08 09:22 AM

heck yeah

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2008-10-09 05:51 AM

suesea, thanks babe

Margherita
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Eternity

3 posted 2008-10-09 11:47 AM

quote:
you move your feet in the sand
making little places for my mind

Exquisite and so uniquely creative!

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Dark Stranger
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West Coast

4 posted 2008-10-09 02:48 PM

Ms mar. Thank you dear lady

Alison

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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

5 posted 2008-10-09 07:05 PM

Hmmmm. Some of the most quiet whispers sing the most erotic songs. I love this, D.

A

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6 posted 2008-10-10 05:43 AM

ms ali-san, thanks babe

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