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working progress...input plz! |
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gator89 Junior Member
since 2008-10-08
Posts 12Ohio, USA |
hey all! well i was looking out the window today and felt inspired by the changing of the seasons. i started to write and i took the point of view of a evergreen tree talking about other trees. ha may sound weird but i like it so far. i'm just a little stuck and would like some input. thanks! The time of year has come to pass When all my friends have a task To drop their leaves upon the earth Until the spring and life's rebirth Red, orange, yellow and in between But still I stand, still as green Chill fills the air, their branches weep As my friends fall to sleep |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh this is quite lovely Dan!! keep up the good work...  love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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