Open Poetry #43 |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast ![]() |
watching you without windows is like drinking cold water on those afternoons later when you could read my mind easier than your own and those thoughts were there with the refrigerator door open pressing themselves inside not wanting to be frozen but wanting just to be cold enough to slow down into a lifetime of needing your warm places and of you knowing the melting too like the wet look of your lips when you smiled back at my eyes and asked me to look through you again ______________ daark |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
to slow down into a lifetime of needing your warm places and of you knowing the melting too like the wet look of your lips when you smiled back at my eyes and asked me to look through you again you know Mr Daark... your work never ceases to amaze me... you make the wonderful wonderful! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms r/b thanks lady woman |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
through the looking glass darkly, reflections I see of cold hands, warm heart. Indigo |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is a very good poem. I enjoyed reading it. Hugs, Ethel |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms indi. It is a pleasure when you are close enough to not be speechless thanks babe. ___________ Ms G's Girl thanks lady for the read and reply. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"wanting just to be cold enough to slow down into a lifetime of needing your warm places" nice thoughts, cool write...enjoyed |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks steavenr..I appreciate it |
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