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Margherita
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Eternity

0 posted 2008-10-01 07:39 PM






* * *


Evocation

On an imaginary piano
my thoughts of longing
gathered in sidereal space
elicit azure notes
and sound waves
composing the unique
tune of you.

Then I let it flood me,
over and over again,
till it blends with mine
and echoes within you.

* * *


© Copyright 2008 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
BluesSerenade
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1 posted 2008-10-01 09:08 PM


A love note in tune with my own heart!

Enjoyed the sound of this melody you're playing,  dear one~

Sunshine
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2 posted 2008-10-01 10:44 PM


I'm not quite sure, m'dear,
how you elicited this lovely photo,
but it certainly fills the void between
word and sound; light and love.

The true heft of the photo
is weighted only in your words.

This is gorgeous!


LindsayP
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3 posted 2008-10-01 11:30 PM



Then I let it flood me,
over and over again,
till it blends with mine
and echoes within you.

Lovely words dear Margherita
enjoyed.

Lindsay

turbulent_melody
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4 posted 2008-10-02 02:43 AM


Lovely, just lovely. )
nakdthoughts
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5 posted 2008-10-02 05:58 AM


Lovely words, Margherita, that left me floating  along this morning

M

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6 posted 2008-10-02 09:55 AM


This is beautiful, Margherita - very beautiful.

Love,
Alison

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2008-10-02 11:19 AM


Oh, my dear Dolphina Margherita, the dolphins would know!
Love your maga poetry and the graphic is divine. I hope you don't mind, but I saved it to my pictures file. I'm also saving this exquisite poem!


Angelo Terrestre

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8 posted 2008-10-02 02:14 PM


Obviously, it is a GRAND piano.
Love reading you.

Tracey

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The Lady
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9 posted 2008-10-02 03:34 PM




your lovely blue notes gather Margherita
and wash me adagio

this is perfect

Robert E. Jordan
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10 posted 2008-10-02 04:02 PM


Yo Margherita,

The words of this poem go well with the picture.

Love Bobby

poddarku
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11 posted 2008-10-02 11:23 PM


"elicit azure notes
and sound waves
composing the unique
tune of you."
- Your tune shall lead me to a heaven as always.

OwlSA
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12 posted 2008-10-03 01:43 AM


Oh my, oh my, oh my!  I came in to see if you had read my yesterday's comment - only to discover that in my overwhelming reaction to your poem, that I somehow forgot to respond!  

Again I read it several times.  The picture and the poem explain each other.

- Owl

nourzihane
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13 posted 2008-10-03 05:47 AM


My dear margherita

pretty nice job. keep on this

Accept my humble pass

love
Nourzihane

Dark Stranger
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14 posted 2008-10-03 06:19 AM


ms mar, you make music out of mouthfuls of whispers...lovely work ms
Margherita
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15 posted 2008-10-04 11:08 AM


Thank you all from my heart for reading and commenting so lovingly, my dear Poet friends! You brought smiles and joy.

May you all enjoy a very happy Week-end.
Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

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16 posted 2008-10-05 03:30 PM


Most interesting and so intriguing is the
graphic....so many fascinating things to
see and wonder of.

Bill Charles
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17 posted 2008-10-05 06:01 PM


Margherita,

Lovely heartfelt write, and with graphics. If I could just figure out how to do that...

BC

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18 posted 2008-10-05 06:51 PM


Oh yes, "let it flood me"...
Such an exciting rendering!

Artic Wind
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19 posted 2008-10-07 05:47 PM


Absolutely Wonderful! Margherita!!!


ARCTIC WIND

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20 posted 2008-10-07 06:11 PM


Margherita, this is absolutely beautiful...
both the words and the graphics. Love it all!!
Hugs,
Ethel

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Margherita
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Eternity
21 posted 2008-10-08 03:41 AM


What a joy to find your loving replies, dear Barry, Bill, Kathleen, Michael and Ethel! Thank you from my heart.
Have a great day.
Love,
Margherita

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