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DreamerSpirit
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since 2006-10-02
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Buenos Aires, Argentina

0 posted 2008-10-07 12:44 PM



Today I'm posting something I wrote not to long ago, in a small coffee break I took.
I hope you all enjoy this one, as much as I did writing it.

The Musician and The Dreamer
The dreamer found himself
in a preet little bar
as he was entering
he started to a song

and then he saw her
the musician played songs
of peace and harmony

and it was alright
her songs were very sweet
yes she was alright
her songs went on forever

and she was,
such a good player
that the dreamer thought that
the music and her were one

in her eyes he could see
sadness and disgrace
but in her smile and voice
he could see she had hope
she still had hope for the future
that she knew was yet to come
he approached when she finished
just to say hello
the musician talked to him
as if he were the very first
to notice her

and they were alright
they shined when they were talking
yes they were alright
then she sang a song he never listened before
and she was
so good singer
that the dreamer thought that
the music and her
were one.

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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2008-10-07 12:53 PM


a coffee break well used!
Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
2 posted 2008-10-07 12:21 PM


DreamerSpirit,

Would love to take a coffee break in this cafe... Telling write...

BC

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

3 posted 2008-10-07 04:50 PM


one good write...thanks for sharing your coffee break
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