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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2008-10-05 11:12 PM


  
     In soft relate
         of soul permeate
             another place, another time
                brings the clean, clean smell
                   of angelic dwell
                      knowing
                         knowing
                            the friendship fragrance
                               was mine~

     In pure relate
         etched permeate
            flows as true as silk
               teat leaks sequenced seriatim
                     as sure as this soul  breathes~

                          I do not seep this way alone
                      for never could there be
                      a fragrance sweeter
                      than the beat of angelic wing
                      that flutters in friendships' throng
                            Lift me now in knowing how
                              new notes sing clean
                                   the ~Pastor's song~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -               noles1@totcon.com

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1 posted 2008-10-05 11:36 PM


welcome home sweet poetess
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2 posted 2008-10-05 11:48 PM


Dear Marge;

Lovely and good to see your work again! hope things are getting better every day!

Love
Betty Lou

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3 posted 2008-10-06 12:32 PM


I used to wonder how a bird could fly across a sky, and claim it...

now I KNOW.

*smile*

love you dear lady


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4 posted 2008-10-06 05:33 PM


Wow, Marge...beautiful write...

j.

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5 posted 2008-10-06 09:04 PM


loved your imagery...well done...thank you for sharing...
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6 posted 2008-10-07 12:18 PM


excellent write, full of feelings, I loved it.
Denis.

Elizabeth Santos
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7 posted 2008-10-07 12:37 PM


Pure Marge with a Tindal spin
Don't know anyone whose friendship heart is more loving
Great write!
Take care
Lizzie

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8 posted 2008-10-07 12:43 PM


Marge,

Welcome back.  You have been missed - this is lovely, lovely, and even lovely.

A

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9 posted 2008-10-07 09:05 AM


beautiful
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10 posted 2008-10-07 09:09 AM


So good to see you back and your words are as beautiful as ever. Welcome home. Take care and Have fun. Steve


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11 posted 2008-10-07 05:22 PM


As always, your words ring out with pure emotion.

Trust you are feeling better and getting stronger each day.

ooxx  Marti

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12 posted 2008-10-09 12:12 PM



Lovely poem Marge and it definately has got the Tindal spin. It's great to see you

posting again. Have a great day dear lady.
Love you.

Lindsay

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13 posted 2008-10-09 12:40 PM


Amazing.
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14 posted 2008-10-09 02:44 AM


Smooth as silk...James
Marge Tindal
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15 posted 2008-10-09 05:47 AM



'I used to wonder how a bird could fly across a sky, and claim it...

now I KNOW.'


  Because my heart speaks
   I claim that I know this night ..
      That all things come right
          when they come round so easily~
                       Yes, I do~
                          I word-claim this night~
                              God sends angels
                                 to affirm my love~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -               noles1@totcon.com

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16 posted 2008-10-09 07:58 PM


Lovely write Marge with much feeling behind it.
                             Ida

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17 posted 2008-10-11 10:51 AM


good read
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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18 posted 2008-10-12 03:24 AM


Dear beautiful Marge... I love this!

love RDB x

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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19 posted 2008-10-12 04:11 AM


Through your beautiful words I can feel that angels have touched your heart and you are blooming and healing within this profound awareness.

Uplifting and beautifully presented, dear Marge.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

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20 posted 2008-10-12 11:30 AM


Beautiful poetry, beautiful brushes of heart to heart... that's PIP.

It is wonderful to read your words... and I'm not surprised at all that they're so touching. *S* Hugs to you, sweet lady!

Marge Tindal
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21 posted 2008-10-13 12:19 PM



And ... the sweet angelic fragrance of him encircles ... letting me know that I AM WATCHED ... I AM SAFELY KEPT in his knowing ... I AM BLESSED with the earthly touch of his Heavenly grace~
HE is large with love~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -               noles1@totcon.com

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22 posted 2008-10-14 06:48 PM


Just Beautiful Marge, I always love your work!~


ARCTIC WIND

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23 posted 2008-10-17 07:04 PM


So glad to see you write again Marge and as usual perfect words from the inkwell of a lovely lady.
Hugs to you dear friend.

~Titia~

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

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24 posted 2008-10-25 09:09 AM


"knowing
  the friendship fragrance
    was mine~"

Marge - The heady aroma of this piece uplifts and refreshes the spirit and I do so adore the scent of you dear poetess friend.

Janette

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

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