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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
follows the sun, so comes the moon in stealth-like silence slipping softly by shadows of reflections like still-life waters ebbing its flow across night's sky moon-lit measures of pallid light shining bravely, surely beaming casting spells like skipping stones on mirrored faces of soft lake's gleaming follows the sun, so comes the moon as night-shades drift through autumn days cool eves glow with heaven's blessings as seasons change their ordered ways they sit and they watch nature's fresh play as the setting of sun ends life's short day he reaches for her hand as she does his and they know without words what love really is |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Well, dear Steaven, you have outdone yourself with this wonderful moon-love-write. A keeper. They need no words, but good for us that the Poet shared them. Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Lovely scene, Steaven. Ida |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Wow, This is really GOOD!! I love the mind picture. Very vivid. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I loved the skimming stones on the face of the lake...hands speak a language deeper than any other. Beautiful write. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Steaven my friend, that is one delightful poem, you wrote it so well, much enjoyed. Lindsay |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Margherita, thank you kindly...your kindness is effusive...glad you liked it Ida, appreciate your kind words WT, so glad you liked it...thank you so much TD, in that we are kindred spirits...I liked the skipping stones too, but I must admit, I hadn't thought of the language of the hands until you brought it up...as always, you are so insightful Lindsay, I am honored by your gracious compliment...thanks |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
steavenr - 'follows the sun, so comes the moon as night-shades drift through autumn days' very nice indeed, enjoyed the read and these lines... BC |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I agree with Everyone!!  ARCTIC WIND |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Bill, thank you so much for the kind comments Artic, glad you liked it...thank you |
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tsu Junior Member
since 2008-10-20
Posts 29u.k. |
there are so many wonderful images in your poem and the confirmation of the joy of human touch..a really lovely write. |
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