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Open Poetry #43

Behind our backs--cauchy3

cauchy3
Member

since 2008-06-10

Posts 61

0 posted 2008-10-05 02:06 PM

Behind our back..
Fingers in pies are legal charms.
Hush to hush are money bucks.
All are bites but not all are barks.
Lent a hand is all in turn.

Rainbows colors go to eyes.
Rainbows whipped are body wild.
Apples discarded are legal charms.
Causal laws are not equal hams.

Chairs with arms are general man.
Legal charms are backward asses.
Woods and babe got my spoons.
Jungle toys are human tools.

Beaten paths as there are laws.
Net and draw as there are charms.
Sinful then go behind the bars.
All are jobbed behind our backs.
----------Cheung Shun Sang=Cauchy3----------

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

1 posted 2008-10-06 02:25 PM

ok, though I cannot admit to understanding your work, I will say that if the purpose of poetry is engender feelings in the reader, this one succeeded...it is filled with raw, almost intimidating, emotions...I've read it several times and found it intriguing each time

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