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Open Poetry #43

The Life Force of Music

turbulent_melody
Junior Member

since 2008-10-01

Posts 22
Australia

0 posted 2008-10-05 09:55 AM

Privately, I entitled this poem "The Life Force of Trance," for trance music has been an inspiration to me for many years, however not everyone here will be familair with this particular genre, thus I went with "Music" instead.

THE LIFE-FORCE OF MUSIC
by Graham Frizzell.

When the volcano within has gone extinct,
the beat of the drum moves the earth.

When the fire in my heart can no longer breathe,
a memorable hook flashes and reignites the flames.

When all I can feel is the biting Southerly cold,
a blissful breakdown blankets me like a breeze of Northerly birth.

When life and love have left me high and dry,
a climactic melody drenches my soul like a desert rain.

[This message has been edited by turbulent_melody (10-05-2008 10:29 AM).]

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2008-10-05 10:08 AM

enjoyed the "music"....good write! welcome
to passions..

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2008-10-05 12:49 PM

turbulent_melody,

Enjoyed the read of the 'Trance'...

BC

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2008-10-05 06:50 PM

Welcome to Passions.
Trance music, although I am not totally familiar; the earth gives her own rendition and of that I am compelled.
Nicely done.

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