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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

0 posted 2008-10-05 04:27 AM

Automne, pourquoi
restes tu si longtemps ?
D'élégantes australiennes
prennent l'avion
et retrouvent le printemps...
Paris s'enrhume,
La mer s'énerve,
seul le coeur se souvient
qu'il peut aimer encore....
Automne, pourquoi
pleures tu si longtemps ?

.......................
.......................

Autumn, why do you remain
for such a long time?
elegant aussies take the plane
and find again the spring...
Paris catches a cold,
the sea gets all worked up ,
only the heart remembers
that he can still love....
Autumn, why do you cry
for such a long time?

[This message has been edited by 2islander2 (10-05-2008 12:37 PM).]

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2008-10-05 04:57 AM

oh Yann... this is delightful... I love it, love it, love it!!

love
RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

2 posted 2008-10-05 05:23 AM

Hello Roniece, I thought about you and wrote this poem....I wish you had a tremendous voyage....

a plus

yann

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

3 posted 2008-10-05 05:38 AM

ah merci beaucoup my lovely friend...that is just so sweet... my time in Paris was delightful, I am looking forward to returning next year... only 10 months to go!!

love
RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2008-10-05 07:13 AM

Il y a quelque chose de magique vraiment dans ton poème, cher Yann. Des images extraordinaires!

J'apprécie beaucoup que tu aies envoyé les deux versions.

C'est aussi un hommage très tendre à chère Roniece, notre enthousiaste de Paris.

Absolutely beautiful, one of my favorite of yours.

Love,
Margherita

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2008-10-05 12:09 PM

well done to the poet and the posters...
an enjoyable read...Thanx for the trans-
lation.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

6 posted 2008-10-05 12:59 PM

2islander2,

Enjoyed reading this writing.

BC

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2008-10-05 02:02 PM

Now I wonder what Aussie you might have been referring to! lol

This is a beautiful piece of writing from the coeur!

To love and loving!
Linda

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

8 posted 2008-10-05 04:24 PM

Délicieux, Yann!

- Owl

Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

9 posted 2008-10-05 04:41 PM

.

Now this is very good.
With your permission
I would like to add it to my Word file
of poems by others.

Again very good

John

.

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

10 posted 2008-10-05 05:57 PM

Yann,

Now is the time to think of a trip to Oz.

Bobby

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

11 posted 2008-10-06 01:26 PM

Enjoyed you thoughts on autumn, yann.
Ida

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

12 posted 2008-10-06 01:34 PM

Merci Margherita pour ton délicieux commentaire, je suis content que tu apprécies le poème, c'est vrai que j'ai pensé à Roniece qui s'en va retrouver le printemps dans l'hémisphère Sud, elle en a de la chance.

amitiés

yann

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

13 posted 2008-10-06 01:35 PM

Thank you Magnus, sometimes it is more easy to write the poem in french, and only then translate it, I' m glad you enjoyed the poem...

best wishes

yann

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

14 posted 2008-10-06 01:37 PM

thank you BC for leaving a messsage, you are nice.

yann

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

15 posted 2008-10-06 01:38 PM

Hello Linda, there is not too much aussies on the site and her posts may betray her...Thank you for the joke.

yann

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

16 posted 2008-10-06 01:39 PM

Thank you Owl.

best wishes

yann

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

17 posted 2008-10-06 01:41 PM

Hello John, thank you for leaving a message, of course you can record the poem, it is an honour for me....I love your work very much...

best wishes

yann

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

18 posted 2008-10-06 01:42 PM

Thank you Bobby, where is Oz, is it the country of the wizard....I enjoy very much the movie of victor fleming...

best wishes

yann

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

19 posted 2008-10-06 01:43 PM

Thank you Ida for your kind comment.

hugs

yann

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