Open Poetry #43 |
Impermanence |
secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Impermanence A pristine crescent moon tipped in finest Autumn splendor, (the essence of all things pure and lucent) tether-floats in an infinite “deep-Time” sea of breaking clouds and stars, as these vast, ancient hills sing anthems to the lonely poet-heart of Nature’s bittersweet consolation on those things tiny, fragile, ethereal, transient, and forever passing… beyond all hope or memory. ---b. e. adams (10/03/08) |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Such is the nature of life, that each life form evolves, moves between stages, eventually returns to the whole of the Universe. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bruce~ Soft cadence of thoughts drift these beautifully moonbeamed sighs through your ink~ Oh fellow-lover of the moon-in-crescent, shortly I shall post a *gift* for you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ Email - noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (10-04-2008 12:10 AM).] |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"tether-floats in an infinite “deep-Time” sea" ties me and sweeps me away at the same time poet |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Stealing Kate's words - I know she won't mind. - Owl |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
May your fellow pipsters continue to enjoy the permanence of your poems on the impermanence of Nature! Another fine penning, Poet Bruce! Warm hug, Linda |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
this one deserves multiple reads for its layers of thought-provoking goodness...excellent...very well done |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Bruce, I could have sworn that I responded to this poem - it's beautiful. Alison |
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DreamerSpirit Member
since 2006-10-02
Posts 240Buenos Aires, Argentina |
Very descriptive poem. I enjoyed it. |
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