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Open Poetry #43

Dreams

A Beautiful Disaster
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since 2007-01-13

Posts 409

0 posted 2008-09-22 08:09 AM

I'm lying awake through this lonesome night,
Give in to the yearning to be by your side,
The longing within...Then I close my eyes,
Indulge in my dreams one more time.

I soak in your warmth,
Slowly breathing you in,
I feel your soft hands
With my all bare skin,
I melt from your words,
Then you touch me again,
And in this indulgence I sink.

Desire overwhelms as your lips cover mine,
Each look makes me tremble, each touch makes me die.
I lean to you so I can hear you breathe,
Temptation gets stronger than me, and I freeze.
My head's on your shoulder, I'm holding you tight,
I won't let you go through all of this night.

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

1 posted 2008-09-23 12:59 PM

Oh. I'm at the office--but you took me somewhere else entirely.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

2 posted 2008-09-23 07:30 PM

a very sensual write for the theme of closeness...nicely done

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2008-09-23 07:38 PM

What a beautiful poem this is!
Thanks for sharing.
Hugs,
Ethel

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Alison

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since 2008-01-27

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4 posted 2008-10-06 03:47 PM

Another one that stands out to me.

A

DreamerSpirit
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since 2006-10-02

Posts 240
Buenos Aires, Argentina

5 posted 2008-10-07 12:19 PM

Nicely written poem, and my favourite 'subject' dreams.

thanks for sharing, it was very inspiring!.
Denis.

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