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A Beautiful Disaster
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0 posted 2008-09-22 08:09 AM


I'm lying awake through this lonesome night,
Give in to the yearning to be by your side,
The longing within...Then I close my eyes,
Indulge in my dreams one more time.

I soak in your warmth,
Slowly breathing you in,
I feel your soft hands
With my all bare skin,
I melt from your words,
Then you touch me again,
And in this indulgence I sink.

Desire overwhelms as your lips cover mine,
Each look makes me tremble, each touch makes me die.
I lean to you so I can hear you breathe,
Temptation gets stronger than me, and I freeze.
My head's on your shoulder, I'm holding you tight,
I won't let you go through all of this night.

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Pilgrimage
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1 posted 2008-09-23 12:59 PM


Oh.  I'm at the office--but you took me somewhere else entirely.  

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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2 posted 2008-09-23 07:30 PM


a very sensual write for the theme of closeness...nicely done
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3 posted 2008-09-23 07:38 PM


What a beautiful poem this is!
Thanks for sharing.
Hugs,
Ethel

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4 posted 2008-10-06 03:47 PM


Another one that stands out to me.

A

DreamerSpirit
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5 posted 2008-10-07 12:19 PM


Nicely written poem, and my favourite 'subject' dreams.

thanks for sharing, it was very inspiring!.
Denis.

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