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tabme
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since 2008-10-03
Posts 37
Mississippi

0 posted 2008-10-03 02:20 AM


These feathered wings,
give none in weathered flight,
but only impedes ones outcome,
in the meeting at the wake,
this what ties us in,
the notion of conversation,
but in practice,
a rising wall surfaces,
between intention and perspective.


A piece I wrote after taking more than my share of a pill.  I wasn't aware that I was to share half of it... and the night turned bad.  People started being not so friendly.  This is about how a person can become lost in a conversation, despite the others best intentions.  Was created at the end of that night, in a very depressive state despite being on something that is suppose to make wonders happen.  It apparently can go both ways if the mood is right.  



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kanashe
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since 2008-05-21
Posts 59
america
1 posted 2008-10-03 10:17 AM


enjoyed
-ashe

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