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Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri

0 posted 2008-10-02 07:07 PM



I woke this morning, whispering my want
Tasting you on my lips
Only to remember you are just a dream

I went through my day aching
Needy
Craving the touch of your hand

In a fog of need
I trace the path your fingers travel
Even if only in my mind

Your voice urging me on
Urging me to touch
To taste

And oh oh I can feel you
Feel your hands your lips
Taking me higher

And still still I want
Want you with a passion
So deep so strong

All I can do is dream


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LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria
1 posted 2008-10-02 09:28 PM




And still still I want
Want you with a passion
So deep so strong
All I can do is dream.

But what a lovely dream Paula,
It's the next best thing.  Enjoyed

Lindsay

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2008-10-03 10:33 AM


And dreams like this can be very very real ...

How deeply passionate!

Intensely rendered desire.

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia
3 posted 2008-10-03 11:11 AM


Thats all I can do too , but no one can take those dreams away
Hope

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