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steavenr
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0 posted 2008-10-02 12:02 PM


no time for debate
as rounds fly past
popular war or not
this one is suddenly...real

no chance to ask why
or challenge fate's cry
only fear-tinged courage
where men fight and die

explosions too near to believe
...bombs falling faster...
no time to relieve
my mind, just to receive

the fallout of ideology's fare
cold to the soul, hot to the skin
aimed at my heart down here
where can I run--I hear...nowhere

not at freedom's crossing
not at peace's gate

I hear the rush of gushing blood
hushing the voices in my head
the searing metal has torn clean through
I lie there still and dead...

faintly I hear the voices
I heard so clear before
country, family, valor
and the peace to believe...

it's why I fought this war

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2008-10-02 12:59 PM


I felt my breath shorten while I read your powerful words. If only the dead ones could still send a message ... I think it would be a plea to stop the crazy wars ... a message of love and peace.... to be spread by a poet.

Thank you for this!

Love and peace.
Margherita

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