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Shaken but not down
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Shaken but not down |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india 
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Shaken but not down ================================== Pale souls seek personal caves, for today is the day of sun. A Saturday crowd is on their way to shake off a memory. They have come home early. Now at the parks, paths, malls, movies and wherever their family has asked they are playing. With the kids. With the life. With the thoughts. With the locks of their love. Now they know how transitory life is. Specially as the sound of the Friday bomb is still ringing in the country. © 2008 - All Rights Reserved Kushal Poddar clever talks delay friendship! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A powerful reminder, dear Ku! It's both, the need to escape the horrors and the awareness of beauty to be savored in every precious instant of life. Love, Margherita  "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
" With the locks of their love." love the expression~~ sad that some must deal with daily fear M |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Again, many, many layers of intricate thought . . . I love it all. The title is of particular interest to me - my interpretation of it is "sensitive and compassionate and afraid - but strong and determined". May that day of the sun caress all those hurt in body and/or soul, by that fateful blast - and may people all over the world stop harming their own. - Owl |
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