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Inspired-8 Member
since 2008-04-14
Posts 311Pluto 
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Not of my thoughts Feelings or dreams Verses yet sought Written for me Not of my knowing Understanding of ways Verses so flowing Immaculate pervades Seemingly natural Completely in touch Realizing the actual Omniscient gives much Not of these hands Yet some of this soul Enlightened sacred plans Creating extols... For my God...Of my God...By my God. Inspired-8 |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Inspiring, humbling, enthralling, refreshing, invigorating, freeing. . . - Owl |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"Seemingly natural Completely in touch Realizing the actual Omniscient gives much" liked this before I read your last line...like it even better now...good work |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Inspired-8, Good thoughts, and words placed well within.. BC |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
Nicely done. I liked the flow and thyme in this and especially the message. Good stuff. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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DreamerSpirit Member
since 2006-10-02
Posts 240Buenos Aires, Argentina |
Very inspiring poem. I loved it. full of meaning. thanks for sharing!. |
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Inspired-8 Member
since 2008-04-14
Posts 311Pluto |
Thank so very much for reading! : ) peace all vic |
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