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Open Poetry #43

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Inspired-8
Member

since 2008-04-14

Posts 311
Pluto

0 posted 2008-10-03 11:55 PM

Not of my thoughts
Feelings or dreams
Verses yet sought
Written for me

Not of my knowing
Understanding of ways
Verses so flowing
Immaculate pervades

Seemingly natural
Completely in touch
Realizing the actual
Omniscient gives much

Not of these hands
Yet some of this soul
Enlightened sacred plans
Creating extols...

For my God...Of my God...By my God.

Inspired-8

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

1 posted 2008-10-04 03:40 AM

Inspiring, humbling, enthralling, refreshing, invigorating, freeing. . .

- Owl

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

2 posted 2008-10-04 03:12 PM

"Seemingly natural
Completely in touch
Realizing the actual
Omniscient gives much"

liked this before I read your last line...like it even better now...good work

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2008-10-04 03:16 PM

Inspired-8,

Good thoughts, and words placed well within..

BC

sewasham
Senior Member

since 2006-09-11

Posts 714
Oklahoma, USA

4 posted 2008-10-06 10:34 PM

Nicely done. I liked the flow and thyme in this and especially the message. Good stuff. Take care and Have fun. Steve

DreamerSpirit
Member

since 2006-10-02

Posts 240
Buenos Aires, Argentina

5 posted 2008-10-07 12:15 PM

Very inspiring poem.
I loved it. full of meaning.
thanks for sharing!.

Inspired-8
Member

since 2008-04-14

Posts 311
Pluto

6 posted 2008-10-07 10:39 PM

Thank so very much for reading! : )

peace all
vic

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