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Open Poetry #43

16. Procession: Jolivete

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2008-10-10 07:28 PM

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Blue sky day
A wash of orange
Atop the trees

White foamed waves
Roll in from the sea

A pair of geese
Come gliding down
Wings outspread
In an autumn breeze

And at dusk
Knowing who it is
That is waiting for him

The grand old man
Goes home
Flushed with joy

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Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2008-10-10 10:09 PM

Yo John,

This is very good. Enjoy your Jolivete.

Bobby

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

2 posted 2008-10-11 02:04 AM

This is so descriptive and enjoyable, the birth of the dusk and the mood develops itself as the break of a wave, I can easily share the feelings of the old man....

thanks

yann

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