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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2008-09-30 05:56 AM



something about how we deal with
the space between those moments
when we were accidental strangers
on the same train that was double
parked against the one way sign

and the daily wishing back to ones
that leave us with our hands there
in each other's laps of their minds
twiddling thumbs for the vibration
pretending it is cellphones calling

with a voice on the other end
admitting how bad the empty is
and how much the filling is needed
and would it be too much to ask
to use concrete this time with ends

that can't be pulled out of permanent
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daark

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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
1 posted 2008-09-30 07:32 AM


with a voice on the other end
admitting how bad the empty is
and how much the filling is needed
and would it be too much to ask
to use concrete this time with ends

that can't be pulled out of permanent


mmmm.... wonderful Mr Daark!

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
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West Coast
2 posted 2008-09-30 07:40 AM


Ms R/B thanks babe
Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
3 posted 2008-09-30 01:07 PM


Lost count on the number of times
this has blessed my eyes...

probably because I miss 101 and all
of the memories I have of home.



Thank you.


Dark Stranger
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West Coast
4 posted 2008-09-30 01:26 PM


Ms sun. Thanks lady love for the touch
Indigo
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since 2001-05-17
Posts 602

5 posted 2008-09-30 03:01 PM


with a heart in debt
waiting for the bailout of
wantings in meltdown.

Indigo


Dark Stranger
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West Coast
6 posted 2008-09-30 03:10 PM


Bail can be paid in leather ribbons ms indi. Thank you
The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
7 posted 2008-09-30 11:16 PM




"and the daily wishing back to ones
that leave us with our hands there
in each other's laps of their minds"

stranger darlin'
you have a certain touch
you know?

yeah
you know

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
8 posted 2008-10-01 05:47 AM


ladyone...thanks babe for peeking in and standing close
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