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XOx Uriah xOX
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since 2006-02-11
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0 posted 2008-09-30 05:06 PM



Mankind
feels the need
to shower or bathe each day.
It causes me to wonder...
what they strive to wash away?

What other creature
imagines such filth?
No other carries
such discontent.

They remove
contact with nature...
then spray on
nature's scent.

Is it because of
Man's TRUE Nature,
buried deep
beneath the dirt,
that he scrubs away
at the form of clay
and sprays a fragrant squirt?

You can scrub
and you can scour
with all your might,
for what its worth.
This water below
will not uncover
what lies beneath the earth.

This action is not
that of BEAST,
although "beast"
is now your prison.

MAN must
continue to
till the ground,
until the Son of Man
has risen

Much is told
by the actions
of those in death,
who know it not,
but strive to keep
debris away from their
precious private plot.

Visit the tomb
at dawning,
in your ritual of grief,
to wash and anoint the body
of the dead that lies beneath.

***

© Copyright 2008 Larry F. Leake - All Rights Reserved
Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
1 posted 2008-09-30 05:27 PM


Most interesting poem, Uriah but it hasn't convinced me to give up bathing.
                               Ida

XOx Uriah xOX
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since 2006-02-11
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2 posted 2008-09-30 05:32 PM


hahaha   (((Ida)))     I'm glad    ::smiles::
serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

3 posted 2008-09-30 05:41 PM


and this brought back a fond memory for me too.

I had one of my moments of dim curiousity and asked my father, the farmer:

"Where does dirt come from?"

I can still hear him laughing, so thank you.

and sheesh


steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

4 posted 2008-09-30 11:44 PM


"They remove
contact with nature...
then spray on
nature's scent."

thanks for a late night laugh...good write

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
5 posted 2008-10-01 12:58 PM




"It causes me to wonder...
what they strive to wash away?"

ahhhh very good question Larry
I enjoy your work
as always

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