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steavenr
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0 posted 2008-09-29 05:05 PM


If I could be just half as smart as I think I am
I would be at least twice as smart
As they all thought that I would someday be

If I could be just half as smart as I think I am
I'd worry less about myself and turn
To lift all others to my efficiency

If I could be just half as smart as I think I am
I'd notice more the faults in others
For the many less I'd see in me

If I could be just half as smart as I think I am
I'd truly struggle to correct the ones
Who've never been so smart as me

Alas, you say, how can it be
That pride would raise its ugly head
Did you listen slower than I wrote?
Did you hear not what I said?

If I could be just half as smart as I really think I am
I'd have to learn to critique, and patronize and even condescend



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1 posted 2008-09-29 06:08 PM


Now that's smart, clever and very telling.
Never stop learning.

Good job.

The answer is always NO, Until the question is asked.

Alison
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2 posted 2008-10-01 02:09 AM


Steaven,

I like this one.  It's interesting and says a lot.

Alison

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