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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2008-09-29 06:32 AM


it seemed the afternoons always had sounds
that complimented your woman words
perhaps it was doves talking
about how you moved your legs
as you danced with my suggestions

I know he was watching us often
and didn't seem to mind the attention
that we traded like baseball cards
with our hands under the table
and our ankles brushing each other

we only visited the adultery store
and never bought anything to take home
but we did have the catalogs
from way back in the beginning
and we made lists, oh I loved the lists

we would have needed their truck
to carry all of the possibilities
so you just used him in some of those ways
and I used others in occasional likewise
to keep us in practice for some christmas

when we would break each other like toys


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1 posted 2008-09-29 08:20 AM


"we would have needed their truck
to carry all of the possibilities
so you just used him in some of those ways
and I used others in occasional likewise
to keep us in practice for some christmas

when we would break each other like toys"

oh and this too....

"but we did have the catalogs
from way back in the beginning"

yeppers... diggin this one for sure
good morning D

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2008-09-29 09:04 AM


Ms suesea. Thanks babe for shopping with Dark
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3 posted 2008-09-29 01:14 PM


spread across pages
of wanting, she discovered
practice makes perfect.

Indigo

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2008-09-29 01:26 PM


Ms indi. And perfect makes practice a mutual pleasure, thanks babe
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5 posted 2008-09-29 04:16 PM


Something to be said for keeping our hands on the table!!  
Temptation lurks when it's the other way around.  

Oh,  and Merry Christmas to you, DS~

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6 posted 2008-09-29 10:53 PM


Bonjour Mr Daark... I have returned from my vacation.. did you miss me?  LOL!  I like this offering from you ... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2008-09-30 05:53 AM


ms bluezy....thanks babe and always keep your hands under the table..coffee?

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ms r&b, thanks babe and welcome back, hope you had a wonderful time.

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8 posted 2008-10-06 04:03 PM


D

I love the lists too.  Mine seems to be getting longer all the time.  You did good with this one - most good.

A

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9 posted 2008-10-06 10:23 PM


thanks ms ali-san
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