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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. She throws Back her hair On which Despite the years Her fortunes rest While I smile With hidden joy Being no more Than second best . |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I thought the first verse could stand alone here, because the second just confused me... I know you don't like to explain stuff, but if you could, would help me out? (The times that you did explain truly helped me to appreciate the quality, I promise you.)  ?With my apologies, too. I'm one of those people who stand in front of 3-D magic images, foreeeeeeeeeeeever...saying, "I just don't see it."  |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Really SB . . . A gold digger who's 22 or 25 passing you by may cause disappointment At 47 there’s a very lucky sense of having missed the bullet Thanks for reading John . |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
OH.  and laughing at myself too... I'm not really accustomed to reading you so literally! Hmmm... so sometimes yer easy, eh? grins and hugs thank you |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
loved it for itself and then I read your explanation...could not stop laughing (is it permissible to laugh at that which is totally un-PC?) |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Steve, Sure. What can they do to you now? Thanks for reading. John |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Well --- I understand your explanation, but boy, I totally missed it (even read the explanation a couple times before getting it...woe is me.... As usual though...enjoyed you much. j. |
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graeshine2006 Member
since 2008-06-03
Posts 368The Prairie Lands, USA |
LIked it (with explanation also) very much. It's always good to miss a bullet, especially good when it's and expensive one! |
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