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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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0 posted 2008-10-03 06:28 AM



sometimes when you are doing your busy
and have it all unpacked and arranged
in haphazard lovely around you

you stop for a moment and put me on
over the nudity of your skin ends
without buttoning me or zipping

just loose fitting old dog friendly
with the sleeves rolled up
and you stand at the mirrors there

and let me wear you too for awhile
as you fold your arms inside me
and then you peel me away slowly

seducing my thoughts with all or nothing


_______________

daark  (white stone series)

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Margherita
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1 posted 2008-10-03 10:12 AM


quote:
and let me wear you too for awhile
as you fold your arms inside me
and then you peel me away slowly

seducing my thoughts with all or nothing



This is a masterpiece of a poem, it holds tenderness and passion ... and longing too. This series is so very special, dear D.! I feel that your heart plays an important role here ...

Love,
Margherita  



"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2008-10-03 04:54 PM


ms mar, thanks to you favorite lady friend


Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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3 posted 2008-10-06 02:56 AM


just so lovely to read and savor Mr Daark...
love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2008-10-06 05:56 AM


ms r&b, thanks babe
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5 posted 2008-10-06 04:16 PM


D

I looked in my closet but I didn't see you.

A

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2008-10-06 10:22 PM


ms ali-san
you need to be in here with me
to find me..thanks ms

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