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Open Poetry #43
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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2008-09-28 03:05 PM

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Late at Night
Under swaying lanterns—
An Obon dance


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© Copyright 2008 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
2islander2
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1 posted 2008-09-28 05:02 PM

wah, another splendid poem, I like the economy of words very much it adds to the beauty.

yann
Huan Yi
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2 posted 2008-09-28 05:29 PM

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yann,


Thank you

This poem,
brief as it is,
is for Alan Booth

Sleep well
my extinguished friend
and dream . . .

Thanks again


John


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oceanvu2
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3 posted 2008-09-28 05:49 PM

Hi John -- This doesn't seem brief.  It expands each time I read it.  Beautiful tribute.

Best, Jim
Huan Yi
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4 posted 2008-09-28 05:53 PM

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Jim


Thank you


If you read no one else
read Alan Booth.


Thanks again


John


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