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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2008-09-28 12:05 PM



It took years to understand.
We had to live it -
lose the land..
we had to empty out our toes
into crawfish mud that goes
squish-de-lish-d'lish

it is

when you felt a stretch
c'mon
when you felt a song
in strong
strident pleas of chest hair's wheeze
watching muddy melting breeze
make caps in wake of chocolate

froth

before they thought of it...

in your coffee cup.

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2008-09-28 01:58 AM


k~
How gingerly you pour the frothy words of your truths~
This lovely thinker invites me to lift a warm toast to your thoughts~
And .. so I do~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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serenity blaze
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2 posted 2008-09-28 04:45 AM


Hey you...

*poke*

where's your ginger color? Hmmm?

(Don't make me pinch yer cheeks!)



You know I love you, and lawsy woman, we be tried and true!

<--bunches of 'em, just for you.

Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2008-09-28 01:50 PM


LOL, mud caps?
Words that could only from your vantage point.
It's raining here today, but only rivulets of mud..so far. This area didn't fare well 2 yrs ago though, as many were knee high in mud along the mighty Susquehanna after a series of super cell thunderstorms.
What if we had rivers of "mauve mud"??????

oceanvu2
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4 posted 2008-09-28 05:52 PM


Hi Serenity.  Ya keeps gettin' better, and you started out darned good.

Best, Jimbeaux

garysgirl
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5 posted 2008-09-28 05:59 PM


Hi Karen....still got a wonderful way with words, I see!!
I love to read your viewpoint on life. It's very unique
and beautiful! Thanks for being you!
Hugs and love,
Ethel

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