Open Poetry #43 |
The Storykeeper |
Sunshine
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quote: Layers of yesteryear should invade this, my soul, but some ballooning strain of quiet entered and I shrugged to shake it off, to give some sky to my chords, to know if some wind would carry silent songs to attach again reason to life… and that is when the poet entered, who dallied for a day or hours with dolphins on his sharing plate, and he cajoled me, take a piece of time capturing yet another streaming dreamer… So it was, robustly, justly pleasant when I went roaming, just yesterday or when? The day before, perhaps, speaking of dolphins and water and ways of souls to meta particles surrounding all, when it did not surprise me to look up even though I might trip on terra, to see my wants and needs floating above me, in the most spacious of spaces albeit most obvious of places, leaving me traces of stories to imagine… and I kindred my ken with soul to the need of the promise of goal then honor the dolphin ~ a whispered, I will not forget. " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
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Wow...!!!! Love, Eric |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
If you hadn't told me, I might not have seen. I had to look more than once to see the dolphin in the clouds. Absolutely beautiful. The poem and the picture. |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
This is beautiful, K. Bob |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
May I just echo Eric? Wow! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
How very beautiful, Karilea. Ida |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
The sky is never the limit with you, Sunshine. Personally I always saw castles and hostess twinkies but I'm sure there were dolphins up there somewhere, too it's a beautiful piece of writing from a poet's fertile imagination and pen. Thanks for sharing |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Ahhh, here I touch upon deeply inspirational words and sky signs. Wonderful, dear Karilea! Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"and I shrugged to shake it off, to give some sky to my chords, to know if some wind would carry silent songs to attach again reason to life…" oh Karilea so perfect and exquisite |
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graeshine2006 Member
since 2008-06-03
Posts 368The Prairie Lands, USA |
I have to ask.... What will you not forget? |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Sweetie... Anything, and everything that is important to humanity. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your heart is a kind and gentle one, and so full of love. It is evident in every poem you write. Beautifully done, Karilea~ |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
almost transcends the imagination...extremely well done...enjoyed |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Karilea, I have always enjoyed reading your stories. This is no exception. |
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