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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea

0 posted 2008-09-26 05:01 AM



Sunny, just sunny,
we took Interstate 5
and drove down,
just a stop and look,
watching during 15 minutes
a beach and its surfers,
the sailing men cleaning
the steamy junks of the horizon,
The weather was intelligently hot,
we drunk water or pepsi
and made purr the engine,
100 miles away
we arrived in San Diego,
our hearts gently purred again…

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Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2008-09-26 09:16 AM


What a drive, dear Yann, and I love the purring conclusion! This is very captivating.

Love,
Margherita

2islander2
Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
2 posted 2008-09-26 11:52 AM


Dear Margherita, I try to tell the wonderful travael I did in West during the summer 1995 with two friends and a rented car during 40 days....I will tell the memories I have ....

thank you for your kind comment...


yann

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
3 posted 2008-09-27 08:16 PM


Sounds like you had a great time, yann and I'm sure it will produce some very intresting poetry
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