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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
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So. El Monte, California

0 posted 2008-09-22 10:43 PM


I stretch my awareness,
in an effort to return
to a moment long ago.
A moment
that belonged only to me...
and you.

                   Ida

[This message has been edited by Marchmadness (09-23-2008 12:17 AM).]

© Copyright 2008 Ida Werrett - All Rights Reserved
echolong
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since 2008-09-17
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1 posted 2008-09-22 10:48 PM


very beautiful.

Old Echo

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
2 posted 2008-09-22 11:21 PM


Thank you Echo (like that name)
                          ida

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
3 posted 2008-09-23 01:45 PM


Reconnecting in full awareness to a blessed past moment can bring joy and also renewed energy.
Dear Ida, you said this so very beautifully.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria
4 posted 2008-09-25 09:30 PM



Ida, that must have been a very special moment, treasure it always. Those moments

are often few and far between. Love to you
Dear Lady.

Lindsay

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
5 posted 2008-09-26 12:05 PM


simply clever and beautiful, and an opened window...

thanks

yann

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
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In the winds of Cherokee song
6 posted 2008-09-26 12:49 PM


So brief in life but forever in the memories and heart.  Wonderful writing.
Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
7 posted 2008-09-26 05:28 PM


Thank you all for reading and commenting.
                                     Ida

steavenr
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8 posted 2008-09-26 09:07 PM


poignant AND terse...nice combination...well done
secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !
9 posted 2008-09-27 08:42 PM


interesting and effective 'write'!

applause!

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