Open Poetry #43 |
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A Moment |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I stretch my awareness, in an effort to return to a moment long ago. A moment that belonged only to me... and you. Ida [This message has been edited by Marchmadness (09-23-2008 12:17 AM).] |
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echolong Junior Member
since 2008-09-17
Posts 22 |
very beautiful. Old Echo |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Thank you Echo (like that name) ida |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Reconnecting in full awareness to a blessed past moment can bring joy and also renewed energy. Dear Ida, you said this so very beautifully. Love and hugs. Margherita ![]() "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Ida, that must have been a very special moment, treasure it always. Those moments are often few and far between. Love to you Dear Lady. Lindsay |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
simply clever and beautiful, and an opened window... thanks yann |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
So brief in life but forever in the memories and heart. Wonderful writing. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Thank you all for reading and commenting. Ida |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
poignant AND terse...nice combination...well done |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
interesting and effective 'write'! applause! |
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