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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
lucid time-thoughts mingle fresh with dust-laden dreams hyperbole on hiatus, latent memories unfulfilled, undone wishes waft on billows serene silently subdued mind-strokes swim in slues of stillness faintly fallow barrenness of mind lords liege over tranquillity |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Described an autumn morning in my mind, just before daylight. The exquisite blend of then and now. Lovely imagery Steaven. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Your words are of the kind that create great visuals and emotions. Absolutely captivating. Love, Margherita |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
TD, Glad you envisioned this through the eyes of Autumn, caused me to read again to see it through your eyes--thanks for reading & commenting Margherita, Your commentary is far too kind, but thank you kindly anyway |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I can't seem to find a connection to Autumn here but I still think this is a lovely, deep poem. Ida |
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