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Brian and Debby
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Brian and Debby |
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graeshine2006 Member
since 2008-06-03
Posts 368The Prairie Lands, USA 
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Hi all, This is a special poem. My boyfriend sent me a poem and I just had to add to it... the muses overtook me. So, what you are reading is "B" for what Brian wrote, and the "D" is what I added. I did call him and ask him for permission to print this on here. B. Deep in our hearts is a place meant to be A place that God kept just for you and for me D. Yes, I will trust in all He forsees B. For He knew that one day we would meet and would need A place in our hearts for our love to plant seed D. His garden of love I know He will feed B. A love that would blossom, a love that would grow A love we would cherish until we grow old D. He watches our lives as the petals unfold B. God knows of our past and He knows what we need And He brought us together so we each can see D. Two halves of a heart I will trust it to be B. There’s a new life beginning, new love to be had And a place in our hearts in which it can stand D. As we walk through this journey, hand-in-hand) ~Brian Paul Doty and Deborah Anne Webster~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh, dear Debra, I enjoyed this poetic dialogue greatly. It emanates a scent of sacredness and with your addition you created the beautiful effect of hearts entwined ... Very very lovely! Love, Margherita  "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
true synergy...nicely written with a lovely theme...thanks for sharing |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Glad to hear you are so happy, Debra. Ida |
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