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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2008-09-17 09:34 PM



Tasting Delicious

My eyes know even before I'm
close enough to open my mouth
and say Hello that she has  
the silkiness I desire,
the qualities I admire.

"This could go far",
I think as I view her
from afar, wanting to
make sure that she
could be the cure
to pacify my senses
..tasting delicious.

JamesLee
17September
2008



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Robert E. Jordan
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1 posted 2008-09-17 10:42 PM


Good poem James,

Nothing like a good banana split from the Neighborhood Scoop down at the end of the block.

This works well.

Bobby

LindsayP
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2 posted 2008-09-18 12:11 PM



It certainly tasted pretty good to me James

Lindsay

Artic Wind
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3 posted 2008-09-18 10:22 AM


Good stuff lol


ARCTIC WIND

WTBAKELAR
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4 posted 2008-09-18 01:29 PM


the silkiness I desire,
the qualities I admire.

Taste, What a great quality in a person.

2islander2
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5 posted 2008-09-18 05:25 PM


tasting delicious, so does your poem....Very enjoyable to read.

yann

steavenr
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6 posted 2008-09-19 01:45 PM


great mixture of food and affection...works for me
FNG
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7 posted 2008-09-27 01:28 AM


A clear picture to portray of how much you admire this lady.....deliciously engaging

FNG

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