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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Dusk light Tints the air Above the lake With a bronze hue Ducks and geese Huddled in pairs Along the shore You can hear the water Over colored pebbles Flowing under The covered bridge You can feel the stars As one by one They begin to appear A silver moon Rising above the trees The wind Looking for you As I still do Rustling The autumn leaves . [This message has been edited by Huan Yi (09-26-2008 10:36 AM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Your very best! Simply perfect. Love, Margherita  |
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echolong Junior Member
since 2008-09-17
Posts 22 |
sigh! very beautiful!! Old Echo |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
beautiful |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Thank you all John . |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I think this is one of your best, John I'm saving it. Ida |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
a very descriptive, colorful write...much enjoyed...as others have said, beautiful |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Always splendid... yann |
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