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a tip for first loves
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a tip for first loves |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
The girl with whom you are passionately in love, has nothing more to offer you that the one with whom you are moderately in love… The first one always brings you the despair, the second brings you the reassurance for a while…. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Yann, That's not the way it should be at all. Sometimes things don't work out. However, it is only one true love to a customer. Bobby |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
interesting point made! |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thank you James for your comment, I wrote my poem following my experiences .... yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello Bobby, you are right there is a point of balance, one true love, but it is not the same that the passionate first love which make you crazy as inexperimented you are and force you to think.... I think too that girls lead you in different loves....For me I would have true loves with girls I can count on the fingers of a hand....I really think we can true love a few times until the good one.... regards yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello Bruce, thank you for passing by on this poem and leaving a comment... yann |
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