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xxvampirecmxx
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since 2008-08-31
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0 posted 2008-09-24 07:01 PM



Pain within me

All the pain thats inside of me seems so unreal,
I wake up everyday telling myself that everything is going to be ok,
Then your face comes to mind,
thinking of you again and again till my head spins,
I can not explain the pain I get from knowing about what could have been,
Days fade away but
this internal pain still remains.

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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1 posted 2008-09-25 12:22 PM


Dear Courtney, I am sorry for your pain, which you express powerfully here. When thoughts of this kind become very dominant and hurt, make an effort and move, go out, help someone have a brighter day and you too will receive healing.

Very good.

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

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