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xxxFallingSixFeetxxx
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since 2008-09-16
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0 posted 2008-09-23 09:58 PM


People are drowning my hopes and my dreams
Songs and riddles aren’t adequate for me it seems
For years now I have tried to raise my self-esteem
But it’s just crashing down all around me.


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xTr3m3sT
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since 2008-03-03
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1 posted 2008-09-23 10:09 PM


I've had this type of problem before....Great simplistic poem...

Enjoyed.

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
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2 posted 2008-09-24 02:14 PM


I have had a low self esteem most of my life , but found it helps when I write


Hope

WTBAKELAR
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3 posted 2008-09-24 03:28 PM


Keep writing,  It's great therapy.
It also makes good poetry.

GothicCherry
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since 2008-09-16
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4 posted 2008-09-25 11:17 AM


thanks y'all!!!
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