Open Poetry #43 |
Disney Land |
2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
the next day we visited Disney Land… Dreams for children, sandwiches and smiles for individualistic parents, the plastic pirates and the brilliant brass instruments, artificial seas and ghosts one yellow submarine and green garbage cans… In the copper-colored evening, the harmonious parade of the Disney brass band… Prefabricated moment but so unforgettable when you are at 10000 kilometres from your home…. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo 2islander2, It's nice you visited Disney Land. I never have, and neither have my kids. Glad you liked it. Bobby |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Found both to be absolutely charming ... brings out the kid in me everytime~ You make me want to get out of this hospital bed and go join the masses of happy youngsters~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Disneyland is a fun place to be except for those long lines. I haven't been there for a while but need to go and watch the great granddaughter enjoy it. Ida |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Yann, I enjoyed this much, because it reminds me of the fact that we should always enjoy life's gifts with a child's heart. Oh, the wonders! Beautiful! Love, Margherita |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
This poem, Yann, is so me - particularly the last 4 lines. I can't believe how much your thoughts are like mine. I loved the truth and yet, the enjoyment of it all, in spite of the take on it. - Owl |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I also particularly love the first line - as though you were in the middle of a conversation with us - and placing it all in context. - Owl |
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