Open Poetry #43 |
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Feel The Wind |
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DreamerSpirit Member
since 2006-10-02
Posts 240Buenos Aires, Argentina |
I wrote this one last week on a small break i took, in fact the words suddenly appeared and i took a break before they were gone. Feel the Wind Distance separates us and a long time has passed since I last saw you and I'm sure you feel the same but as I told you before leaving whenever you want to feel my presence feel the wind the wind will embrace you as I used to do the wind will whisper sweet words to you as I used to do and trust me when I tell you that the wind is my messenger he will send you my feelings and my words distance separates us but whenever you want to feel my presence feel the wind because when I feel the wind I feel you. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"the wind will whisper sweet words to you as I used to do" very wistful lovely poem |
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WTBAKELAR![]()
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
WOW, DreamerSpirit, This is like a response to my "WHISPERS" It makes me think she is answering back. Cool Poem Thanks. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I loved especially the thought of the wind carrying feelings...an embrace and a whisper...emotions on the fly. Beautiful write. ![]() |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
... el viento susurra palabras de amor ... Oh, this is tender and beautiful. A thought that caresses the soul. Love, Margherita ![]() "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Beautiful!!! I am delighted you took a break to share this. |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed ![]() |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
feels much like this should be sung...enjoyed, thanks for sharing |
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