Open Poetry #43 |
Those Words Unspoken |
HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Those Words Unspoken Thought you were my friend Obviously I was wrong Your silence seems to say That I no longer belong The months you ignored me Was it my wake up call I sensed the sinking feeling As the tears start to fall All of those words unspoken I could not comprehend Still I remember you saying I was your valued friend You gave me reason to write When you kept in touch Do you still recall the times Words meant so much Strange way to treat a friend To stop communicating After all that we had shared Silence is heartbreaking Hope ©2008 |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Every now and then, dear Hope, you write of this heartbreaking pain and you do it so well, that your deep sadness is very much felt. I understand, it is not easy, but remember your own worth and beauty are divine gifts that no one can take from you. Beautiful write! Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
I love the way you write. Well done. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
A very sad post dear Hope, you deserve better than that, but keep the chin up, We are all pulling for you. Good luck Love Lindsay |
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