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Open Poetry #43

Those Words Unspoken

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2008-09-24 01:48 AM

Those Words Unspoken

Thought you were my friend
Obviously I was wrong
Your silence seems to say
That I no longer belong

The months you ignored me
Was it my wake up call
I sensed the sinking feeling
As the tears start to fall

All of those words unspoken
I could not comprehend
Still I remember you saying
I was your valued friend

You gave me reason to write
When you kept in touch
Do you still recall the times
Words meant so much

Strange way to treat a friend
To stop communicating
After all that we had shared
Silence is heartbreaking

Hope ©2008

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2008-09-24 08:50 AM

Every now and then, dear Hope, you write of this heartbreaking pain and you do it so well, that your deep sadness is very much felt. I understand, it is not easy, but remember your own worth and beauty are divine gifts that no one can take from you.

Beautiful write!

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

WTBAKELAR

Senior Member

since 2008-09-09

Posts 1089
Utah, USA

2 posted 2008-09-24 01:34 PM

I love the way you write.
Well done.

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

3 posted 2008-09-25 01:15 AM

A very sad post dear Hope, you deserve better than that, but keep the chin up,
We are all pulling for you. Good luck
Love

Lindsay

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