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Open Poetry #43
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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2008-09-23 06:16 PM


Precious Things


Holy moly
that girls
so fine.
Goodness gracious
I'm going to
make her mine.
Hallelujah
the angels
sing,
blessings from
Heaven are a
precious thing.


JamesLee
23September
2008
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xxxFallingSixFeetxxx
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1 posted 2008-09-23 09:53 PM

Nice!! i like it.it's different and shows emotion without being so serious as every other poem i read.. Good Work!!
JamesMichael
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2 posted 2008-09-24 07:10 PM

Thanks falling for the nice response...James
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