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Open Poetry #43

Bailey Junior High

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2008-09-19 01:44 PM

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Geese flying
In formations overhead
Snow white clouds
An autumn breeze

A blue jay’s cry
The horn
Of a passing train
Acorns falling
From the trees

Ah slender shadow
With the long blond hair
If you had only been
The girl next door
For a few more years

This morning alone
As I walk to my car
A whiff of burning leaves

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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

1 posted 2008-09-19 02:58 PM

sigh

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

2 posted 2008-09-19 03:09 PM

Lovely.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

3 posted 2008-09-19 03:21 PM

John,

This is good work. I think most people remember Junior High School as a hellish experience.

Bobby

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

4 posted 2008-09-19 05:53 PM

EXCELLENT!!

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