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Abe
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0 posted 2008-09-16 01:52 PM




Our Constitution’s Birthday
(September 17, 2008)

In the year, Seventeen eighty-seven
Those thirty-nine, changed our History
They signed that piece of parchment
The Laws of, the Land of the Free.

In more than two hundred twenty years
It has gone through a few changes
That’s not, an easy thing to get done
For, all of our lives, it rearranges.

The First through Tenth Amendments
Are known as our Bill of Rights
And many times, they were in danger
But, the People, usually won those fights.

Sometimes, those people in power
Try to change them, for their gain
Sometimes they will just ignore them
Like we’ve seen, time and again.

They are our only, real protection
With a high and terrible price to pay
If we don’t keep fighting for them
There’s some, would take them all away.

Other Amendments, Thirteen and Fifteen
Abolished Racial Suffrage and Slavery
Supposed to give promised Rights
To all of those promised, Liberty.

The Sixteenth, allowed for Income Tax
And as we know, it has many a flaw
Some say, that it was never Ratified
That, it was never made, a Legal Law.

The Eighteenth, Prohibition of Alcohol
Which was, another legal blunder
With organized crime borne of it
And, the Rule of Law torn, asunder.

The Nineteenth, said Women could Vote
After a very long, contentious fight
Just look at what those Ladies have done
Since, they got their, American Right.

Then, a Repeal of Prohibition
Came with the Twenty-first
In most places, booze flowed freely
To quench America’s, hearty thirst.

The Twenty-second said, Two Terms
Was, all a President could serve
But, as we know, for some, one
Was one more, than they deserved.

The Twenty-sixth said we could Vote
When reaching Eighteen years of age
Since they could fight and die for us
Every time, we had a War to wage.

Those great words of our Constitution
Have served our Country long, and well
Will they withstand the test of time
Or will History show, our Nation, fell?

If we don’t protect them with our life
If we bow to those powers that, be
If we let them twist those words around
One sad day, we’ll be no longer, Free.

We can’t let our precious Bill of Rights
Fail, to protect us all, as they must do
We can’t let one man, or group of men
Twist them into something, they construe.

Though, our Constitution is not perfect
Our Founding Fathers knew, this so
And, “In God We Trust”, is not enough
Our Freedom depends, on where, we go.

We must each, defend those Freedoms
From outside foes, and those, within
It’s, We, the People, wield the power
To lose this battle, which, we must, win.

So, On this Constitution Day
Let’s each, pay the price we owe
To uphold those words of Wisdom
Penned upon that parchment, long ago.

09.16.2008



Del "Abe" Jones
Mankind's greatest accomplishment is not the revolution of technology, it is the evolution of creativity. copyright 1984

[This message has been edited by Abe (09-16-2008 04:04 PM).]

© Copyright 2008 Del - All Rights Reserved
Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2008-09-16 07:12 PM


Yo Abe,

Happy Constitution Day on the 17th.

Nice write.

Bobby

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2008-09-18 03:04 PM


It's sad there are only two replies to this, honoring our most important document.
Thanks Abe, for always highlighting 'WE the people' and not just elected administrators that choose to ignore our input, thereby ignoring and devaluing the very words they are 'hired' to honor and follow.

WTBAKELAR
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Senior Member
since 2008-09-09
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Utah, USA
3 posted 2008-09-18 04:54 PM


I loved your poem and I am glad to see that you are a patriot.  I am also glad that our constitution is sound. We the people own it and pledge our allegiance.  I think it's important to know that the constitution has never changed. The original stays as written.
The amendments make changes to the law, they don't change the original, so we can see where we have grown and advanced as a people.

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !
4 posted 2008-09-19 06:02 PM


Another fine and timely 'reminder' about the 'core' of Democracy (as it was supposed to be)

"The Eighteenth, Prohibition of Alcohol
Which was, another legal blunder
With organized crime borne of it
And, the Rule of Law torn, asunder."

It is pretty sad when a document of this import has to be re-'amended' to undo a
bonehead amendment like the above!

just like some folk want a 'balanced fed. budget' amendment... outrageous!!... vote
disasters like G.W.B. out of office...if they fail to have a 'financially viable' administration...
don't mess with the constitution over something of that nature!

Applause for this 'penning'!

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